I ate a raisin.............................................................................................................................................
.......................I watched it.......................................................................................................................
............................................I smelled it...................................................................................................
................................................................I felt it.......................................................................................
............................................................................I proceeded to lift it to my mouth............................
...............slowly................an inch at a time................................................................I felt it on my tongue...................I was mindful only of the raisin.......................I let the aroma drown me.......
...................I tasted the sweetness.............................I ate a raisin.
Wednesday, September 16, 2009
I Ate a Raisin
Posted by Master of Puppets at 4:51 PM
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3 comments:
I should've wrote a raisen poem. Btw can you give me a copy of photoshop? Thnxx
Really nice attempt to do something interesting with the raisin exercise. I apperciate the fact that you are thinking carefully about the placement of each line.
+3
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